Appy Posted August 24, 2003 Report Share Posted August 24, 2003 (edited) Gathered they standMy frolicky friendsA smile upon each faceMaking my dayImages of woodsSun playing aboveBirds singing togetherFor eachothers loveSitting here lookingAt my frolicky friendsA smile upon my faceAnd a reminiscingOf the Magic Roundabout [24 augustus 2003, Leverkusen]~It's a beautiful day today, felt i had to share it.. don't you just LOVE the Magic Roundabout (VERY old tv-series about.. yesyes, a Magical Roundabout.. wish they would show that again).. Here's a picture of my frolicky friends, that inspired this, with many thanks to Sorciere for hosting it *hugs* Aren't they cute? ~ Edited October 20, 2014 by Appy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parmenion Posted August 24, 2003 Report Share Posted August 24, 2003 Magic Roundabout was the coolest *smile* and so was Wanderly Wagon! I enjoyed the happiness of this poem. Tis nice to have frolicy friends to smile at, keke. The layout for me was fine apart from that one really longg line that stands out in verse 2 like a sore thumb Maybe - "Sun on fallen leaves" as a replacement or something like that? Thanks for sharing your happiness! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted August 24, 2003 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2003 yay! someone knows it And yeah i agree, that line IS in the way.. might change it to something else.. thanks for the idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorciere Posted August 25, 2003 Report Share Posted August 25, 2003 Ohhhhhhhhhh Magic Roundabout!!! Bring back Zebedee! Nice poem btw too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted October 5, 2003 Report Share Posted October 5, 2003 /me has a bag of the magic roundabout but never actually seen it!!!! But all my friends love it so it must be good! Anyway i loves the poem and *smiles* its what u feel on a nice day i love nice days but never bother to write about them maybe i should start? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted October 6, 2003 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2003 Good idea! *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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