Tasslehoff Posted August 15, 2003 Report Share Posted August 15, 2003 HmMm. I did a little looking over this old one. Reworked. Added a bit.. TOok a bit out.. This is what I came with. =- Unrelenting -= As the night falls The memories cry out Tears fall from the blue eyes Lined with detest and love The past envelops the present While the future is hindered Where to run to, where to hide Darkness everywhere, Unrelenting As the time in front slows I remember moving to fast And along came the grateful past Filtering out the bad, the disgust Emphasizing the good, those moments Yet the darkness everywhere, Surrounds me! The foolish lies that have followed The fruitless tears that lay upon my cheek The void happiness swallowed me without a glance The acute darkness surrounds me.. I cant stand it.. Its all too much. Its.. Its.. Its.. UNRELENTING! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted September 2, 2003 Report Share Posted September 2, 2003 I remember moving to fastDid you mean, "I remember moving too fast" here? This is very lyrical and almost dreamlike. I really like the strange combination of "void happiness". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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