autumn_sun Posted June 9, 2003 Report Share Posted June 9, 2003 {{some idiot commented at my school on one of my poems and accused me of living in a fantasy world and said "too far into fantasy can plunge you into the ocean & drown you." talk about irony, eh? Anyway...hey, who says people you despise can't inspire you? }} Living in fantasy Escaping reality Crossing that fine line No longer knowing the difference Wasting away in a game No angelic savior, No elven healer Can help you out now System shut down Goodbye world I'm livin' in a fantasy Wasting away in a game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted June 9, 2003 Report Share Posted June 9, 2003 mmmmm sounds like my brother. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damon Inferel Posted June 9, 2003 Report Share Posted June 9, 2003 My reality poem... Trapped in a realm of misbelief For one to escape brings no relief A reward it is to never escape Though this prison has no walls or shape We dwell in here in happiness Our elves and orcs and deities bless We never tire but rather roam Reality sucks almost as much as home We can die here for forever Our dragonslaying, our final endeavor Many adventures stem from our mind A place so sacred, none can find We drwon in this ocan only by choice So the water within drowns reality's voice Perhaps someday we'll build some boats To the top of the ocean where reality floats But for now we'll swim with imagination And leave reality for procrastination I had to review it wiht a poem... I was quite inspired by the creative genius found within... I'm very proud to have you as my muse Pip... Meow! >< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
autumn_sun Posted June 9, 2003 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2003 (edited) =bows= Why thank you!! The poemy you wrote is muy coolness!! =adds this to the one already on her wall= =hands Neko Boy a hot pink kitty plushie with a bottle of 'dew in it's paws= [i'll do that...!] == mew!! Edited June 9, 2003 by autumn_sun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted June 10, 2003 Report Share Posted June 10, 2003 "The only people against Escapist fantasies, really, are Jailors..." -paraphrase of C.S. Lewis in defense of one of his fantasy works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parmenion Posted June 11, 2003 Report Share Posted June 11, 2003 Creativity through adversity without trying to justify who you are to your critics... Shows you have great self-esteem and self-worth. Treasure those gifts, not everyone has them. For me this post is more about the purpose behind the poem than the poem itself (which i enjoyed very much), but the message is worth listening to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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