Guest squashai Posted May 9, 2003 Report Share Posted May 9, 2003 Malcontent Offensamment égoïste bonheur corrompant Il prospère entre nous. --------------------------------------------- Malcontent Hurtfully selfish tainting happiness it thrives among us. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted May 9, 2003 Report Share Posted May 9, 2003 Bravo!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted May 9, 2003 Report Share Posted May 9, 2003 Passes out in shock at seeing this forum used. Rah! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Celes Crusader Posted May 10, 2003 Report Share Posted May 10, 2003 Nice poem, although it some words aren't "liguistically" correct. Douloureusement égoïste Bonheur séduisant Il prospère en nous. In French, "Offensant" is preffered to "Offensamment". But, since it destroyed the rhyme, I've replaced it with "Douloureusement" "Séduisant" can be used for both "Seductive" or "Tempting". By no mean, I want this to be considered as diminutive, but rather as helpful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Silverblade Posted May 10, 2003 Report Share Posted May 10, 2003 Very nice! Tres Bien! ( <--The extent of my french knowledge) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest squashai Posted May 18, 2003 Report Share Posted May 18, 2003 (edited) Heh, I stink at french. The extent of my knowledge is how to describe people. Petit et grand, blond et brune, etc... Thanks for the feedback, though. I used a internet translator. It was originally a kaiku for my english class.. Ironic, is it not? But when I learn more I will post here with things that I wrote first in french, this I promise. Edited May 18, 2003 by squashai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Celes Crusader Posted May 18, 2003 Report Share Posted May 18, 2003 That's fine with me. I'll never, ever judge someone upon the quality of his/her French as I know how capricious the tongue really is. Your effort is commendable and I'll help you writing anything you need in French. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest squashai Posted May 18, 2003 Report Share Posted May 18, 2003 I appreciate your enthusiasm; you people are really nice. Thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Celes Crusader Posted May 21, 2003 Report Share Posted May 21, 2003 You are as enthusiast as I am, I guess. And the goal of the Pen is to help each other in their writing in every aspects. And your avatar is so cute. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Passionsrejected05 Posted November 23, 2003 Report Share Posted November 23, 2003 *claps* Tres Bien! (Is only a French First Year Student) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arlequin Posted August 12, 2004 Report Share Posted August 12, 2004 Yes it was really good. The rythm was nice, and the meaning interesting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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