Vlad Posted April 20, 2003 Report Share Posted April 20, 2003 The blood pours, as tears. From what I have lost- And what shouldn't be found. Secrets lie in wait, disasters, Life waiting to happen, Death waiting to end. Existence is too brutal, Without those who know, Those who understand best, Often times have never felt it. Pain - deep in my heart. Bulges, screaming to be let out! The terrible horrors I hide... Alas, what have I done to deserve? A fate such as this - telling of loss. Don't waste your life, young ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted April 21, 2003 Report Share Posted April 21, 2003 Difficult reading because of the raw nature of the emotion portrayed. Ouch! Secrets lie in wait, disasters, Life waiting to happen, Death waiting to end. Found that particularly effective twist of phrase - death waiting to end isn't the usual stereotype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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