Zariah Posted February 20, 2003 Report Share Posted February 20, 2003 Father Time: Winter to Spring Crying to the deep wind, Making his presence known, Naked under filtered sky, He wakes the slumbering winter With great abundance of life, His open heart bleeds forth, Touching those who need love And weakening cold intentions Upon the open fields He blankets sleeping minds Nurturing many for their trial In approaching rebirth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jonathan_wolfe Posted February 20, 2003 Report Share Posted February 20, 2003 Now this gave images of life through pain, he's sacrificing himself so the world will breathe again This also reminded me of the paintings that good ol' Leonardo Da Vinci painted, the old man looked like he came right out of one of those. Very touching. Very fitting for the time of year as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nyyark Posted February 23, 2003 Report Share Posted February 23, 2003 Good personification, I really like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted February 23, 2003 Report Share Posted February 23, 2003 *whistles* She does it again. This is great imagery. Nyyark, you know what you're doing when you bring 'em here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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