Deadly Nightshade Posted February 17, 2003 Report Share Posted February 17, 2003 Suffocating You are suffocating me I never asked to be locked up Sheltered from the world about me But you say its for my own good So you keep me in a cage I want to be free Do you even know what that means? I want to run into the horizon Love and laugh and cry Like other people do Normal people But you keep me here You suffocate me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoomGaze Posted February 18, 2003 Report Share Posted February 18, 2003 Nice short poem... gets the point across about your yearning to be free but someone/people want you to do what they want.. I've been in that situation before.. and it aint fun to be in. Great poem Thx for Sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 18, 2003 Report Share Posted February 18, 2003 I really like. This one seemed very vivid to me. While I was reading it I was imaging a caged wolf that wanted to be free to roam the woods again. Really great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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