Deadly Nightshade Posted February 16, 2003 Report Share Posted February 16, 2003 (edited) I walk through the shadows Through the abyss I feel my heart race Nearly beating from my chest No, no I cannot be consumed by my fears I will not A cold sweat forms at the back of my neck The silence nearly overwhelming me I must push forward I cannot give up my feet wont move Somthing looms in the shadows I stop my breath for a moment A hot beath now upon my neck I turn on one heel... Draw a shuttering breath Gleaming fangs A voilent grasp I try to scream Nothing but a frail gasp A calmness fills me Warm lips on my neck I no longer fight ...All is still..... Edited February 16, 2003 by Deadly Nightshade Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 16, 2003 Report Share Posted February 16, 2003 Wow. I like a lot. I think you captured the victim of a vampire's "kiss" perfectly. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elvida Posted February 17, 2003 Report Share Posted February 17, 2003 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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