Vlad Posted February 14, 2003 Report Share Posted February 14, 2003 Rocket through the sky, Blasting through my brains, I can't stop thinking of- You and what you say... Flying - wings apart, Soaring through life, Caught me by surprise, But its what you do... Not pausing to care- About the simplest things, Stop and smell the roses, You may find it too true... Pounding out the hate, Of causes infernal, Doesn't need to be This way or other... Loud and zooming, Speeding past the light, I see you differently, Worse than it shows... Just relax, And enjoy the swim, Down the stream of life, Called consiousness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zariah Posted February 16, 2003 Report Share Posted February 16, 2003 I definately feel the mood of movement, and I like the altering of being calm and then tense, fast and slow, stopping and going. This is really great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted March 11, 2003 Report Share Posted March 11, 2003 You have a very unique style Vlad. I agree with Zariah's comment regarding the alternating emotional feel to each line. Good job, Thank you for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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