Tasslehoff Posted January 28, 2003 Report Share Posted January 28, 2003 I Cry.. Not For The Loss Itself.. I Cry.. For The Way I Lost You.. I Laugh.. Not At The Memory Itself.. I Laugh.. For The Memory Of How You Made Me Smile.. I Blink.. Not Cause It Is So Bright.. I Blink.. For I Cant Believe It Is True.. I Die.. Not From A Sickness in Health.. I Die.. For My Heart It To Broken To Mend.. The Kender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted January 28, 2003 Report Share Posted January 28, 2003 I know you're going to think me sick and twisted, but this seems like a happy poem. Well most of it. The repetition shows the first one as insignificant and the second one as being written in the style of I'll get over it. The last stanza stikes me as out of place though. It fits into the structure, but not the mood of the poem. Or maybe I misinterpreted the whole thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted January 29, 2003 Report Share Posted January 29, 2003 Everytime I read a poem here I just can't believe how talented you all are. It's amazing Tassle..and I really like the style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RIvaL Posted January 31, 2003 Report Share Posted January 31, 2003 quite the interesting poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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