Falcon2001 Posted February 12, 2002 Report Share Posted February 12, 2002 You held me close, My love was fine I could never ever realize The looks were true The purpose false Back up girl It's time to halt An end to all My suffering An end to things love didn't bring So listen now To my little song And when I'm done Go on alone I think you should... BACK UP Give me space All your memories in my face BACK UP Stand back now I'm too far gone to Wonder how BACK UP!!! I listened to Your misery The right thing, yes But oh the pain I never ever Thought of myself Although I did it For your health My love was fine My love was true My love was lust I wanted you Not your body But just you Love's two ways girl How about you Why don't you just... BACK UP! Clear on out Your mistakes are Your own doubts BACK UP! Wipe your eyes It's your turn to Realize You won't change Without the truth So fall on down And break your youth I'll stand by Ya need to fall If you don't lose once You'll lose 'em all So don't curse me Cause I don't care Life is better When you breathe fresh air so... BACK UP! You're going to crash Sit around blaming life And fall down on your ass BACK UP! Life sucks, so @#%$ it Live your own life And carry your own bucket BACK UP! BACK UP AND TAKE A LOOK AROUND! BACK UP! Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Jess Posted February 12, 2002 Report Share Posted February 12, 2002 I think that's one of my favorites, though you must have just written it. It has a lot of what I was saying. I hope this shows that it made sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahsash Geldich Posted February 12, 2002 Report Share Posted February 12, 2002 I really like the style its written in, and love the whole conception of she must pull herself together from her immiturity and lies. Well written Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted February 13, 2002 Report Share Posted February 13, 2002 *Gyr applauds this* I love the message you give, and how you give it. Go Falcon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tralla Posted February 13, 2002 Report Share Posted February 13, 2002 Hmm... a lot of rage, but it's constructive. Like you can see something that she'll never see on her own, and that's frustrating to you. Interesting. Very nicely written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozymandias Posted February 14, 2002 Report Share Posted February 14, 2002 All I have to say is, if we ever pull off ANY sort of Pen get together, I want to hear this man's music!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcon2001 Posted February 15, 2002 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2002 Thanks, Ozymandius...hmm...I'm wondering whether an electric guitar would work too well at a gathering... MWAHAHAH! Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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