Wyvern Posted February 9, 2002 Report Share Posted February 9, 2002 'Bang!' Echo, pain Smoke, blood, shock A cry, swift hands take A jewel and then run rapidly Fear taking over, a scream, shouts Heart palpitating, muscles aching, teeth Clenched and grinding, visions of failure, tears The sound of police sirens, cop yells 'halt, for justice!' No stopping now, too little too late, going all out Police open fire, a number of gun shots ring Running man hit, cry of pain, drops object Diamond falls, as does theif, blood bath Two dead bodies lay on the corner Gift of life thrown in the gutter For regrets and mourning All over a simple *Diamond* Edited by: Wyvern00 at: 2/8/02 7:22:33 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 9, 2002 Report Share Posted February 9, 2002 That's really really impressive... How in the world did you get EZBOARD to center for you! No, seriously, that's really neat - word art that mimics poem content. Nicely done Wyvern. -Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted February 9, 2002 Report Share Posted February 9, 2002 Like this! (center), replacing the ( and ) with [ and ]. Anywho, I *really* like the poem Wyvern- the way you formatted it adds to its effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gwaihir Posted February 9, 2002 Report Share Posted February 9, 2002 Neat. I like the sudden short manner in which everything is conveyed. They feel like exclamations. ---------- I want to be page 93 of Pineapples, the Avian Crows-Nyyark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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