Rahsash Geldich Posted January 13, 2002 Report Share Posted January 13, 2002 I tried to reach out to you today. I don't think you noticed, but its okay; I'll reach out to someone else. I wanted to tell you I am acheiving. In myself, I have started believing. But its okay, I'll tell someone else. I wanted help with my problems For they feel like no-one-can-solve-ems But I suppose I can tell someone else. I guess another day will have to do, I'd still pick no one over you. As much as I tell someone else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted January 14, 2002 Report Share Posted January 14, 2002 Ouch. As a father who is sometimes "too busy", this makes me stop and consider once again. Good (pointed) writing. -Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted January 14, 2002 Report Share Posted January 14, 2002 *Gyr applauds* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahsash Geldich Posted January 15, 2002 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2002 Thanks for replying, I liked that one too, it turned out better than I thought it would because I thought the rythms were off... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tralla Posted January 17, 2002 Report Share Posted January 17, 2002 The words themselves, and the message they sent, were so powerful I didn't even notice the rhythm was off (if it was). =) Wonderful poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Foe Calibur Posted January 17, 2002 Report Share Posted January 17, 2002 Foe nods Well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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