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Before and After


Gwaihir

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Not my usual type of poem at all, not sure if I like it, but *shrug*

 

Before we met, I’d never cried,

Before we met, I’d never cared.

Before we met, life was simple,

Before we met, I slept all night.

 

Now I’m awake missing you babe.

Now I’m awake hearing your laugh,

Or I’m awake, wishing I did.

Now I’m awake, and it’s your fault!

 

Should I have kissed? Knowing I’d change,

Would I have kissed? Knowing you’d die,

Could I have kissed? Knowing it all,

I’m glad I kissed.

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Guest andrea hawk

I like it! It's really tender... Plus I think I like it because I've asked myself the same questions you asked... except for the knowing you'd die part... but I am glad it ended positive with the I'm glad I kissed. I think it's good even if your not sure you like it.

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