Vlad Posted December 11, 2002 Report Share Posted December 11, 2002 What is it? #1 Running, running, running... Running, running, ouch. The colission is a pain, All I see is red, Blurry, blurry red, Deep dark red of my blood, Wash it away, sterilize, The red is still there, A hard and crusty red, Stands tall, mockingly. What is it? #2 So vast, and empty, Yet full of life, Deep and seemingly endless, Like a cauldron of mixing, Gases swirling, dizzy, Tranquil and destructive, Clear, but not translucent, A sea of seas, We are but prisoners, Inside of this dungeon. What is it? #3 Simple, who thought of it, Never breaking, Looping with no end, Stare at the sun, Or down a cup, Faces and eyes. ===Vlad the rage-aholic=== I can't live without rage-ahol! "Me is smart. Dur." -Stick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoaringIcarus Posted December 12, 2002 Report Share Posted December 12, 2002 #1 Interesting. By the 'stands tall and mockingly' do you mean the view of the blood as your head is tilted side ways on the ground, seeing it horizontally, or do you mean the person who caused you this pain? Definitely gives me a feeling of a confuse stupor of unconsciousness #2 Beautiful description of the ocean and/or the sky? Clouds, even? Definitely asking myself "What is it?" #3 The symbol for infinity? As a set completing a larger work, I like the variety of themes here. A good one to finish on, as well. Was I correct in my guesses? -Icarus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted December 12, 2002 Report Share Posted December 12, 2002 #1: A Scab. #2: The Earth's Atmosphere. #3: Thanx Nyyark A circle. We do not write because we want to; we write because we have to. W. Somerset Maugham Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted December 12, 2002 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2002 ...and peredhil wins a cookie! Or at least two thirds of one... Icarus can have the other third... #1 you are both wrong, I think I could have done it better... #2, the sky/atmosphere #3, a circle (why thanx nyyark, did he tell you? In that case he gets part of your share of the cookie ) ===Vlad the rage-aholic=== I can't live without rage-ahol! "Me is smart. Dur." -Stick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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