Brighid of Byrness Posted October 24, 2013 Report Share Posted October 24, 2013 I wrote this poem after a rather intense lucid dream: The osprey's shadow flew across my open window,grabbing my attention in its talons like a silver fish.Hurrying through the ancient doorway,I scanned the horizon above the glittering waves,but nothing moved within the heavy, summer heat.Turning from the sea, a voice whispered to my heart from the beach below:"Where my ocean meets your land,there, within the slightest curve of a kiss,upon a million grains of gritty sand,our vast, blank universe exists." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snypiuer Posted October 24, 2013 Report Share Posted October 24, 2013 words would only ruin the meaning of how much I like this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brighid of Byrness Posted October 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2013 Thanks -- the dream experience it sprang from was a meaningful one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harmonious_Echos Posted October 24, 2013 Report Share Posted October 24, 2013 Wow, I could ponder on this one. Or write an entire short-story. Very nicely done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Portrait of Zool Posted October 24, 2013 Report Share Posted October 24, 2013 Meaningful indeed! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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