MagicianEmpress Posted October 25, 2012 Report Share Posted October 25, 2012 What do people think of this: The Trials Of Focus When ever I try.. Look over there!! To start or work.. I'm hungry.. On things I deem..Hey, that's Funny! Important or needed.. Chipsssssss!!! I find that....y'know, this one thing I read... I stray far...I wonder what that word means... from what I was....Person to chat with, Yay!! Intending to...Gah, Hairs in Face!!! Must pin...I bet I could draw that... Attempt. Why....Hey, I still need to finish that other thing... Is my mind....My room is a Messss... So hard to....I could listen to Music! Focus? (story of my life right now..) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harmonious_Echos Posted October 25, 2012 Report Share Posted October 25, 2012 Totally captured it! And I know, I've totally been there.....wasn't I supposed to do something else here? I don't remember.... hehe... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
James Crow Posted October 26, 2012 Report Share Posted October 26, 2012 Been there, am there, and will hopefuly never leave. For if I were too stop and think straight thought for once I belive the worl would be...squirl! Sorry, what I ment to say was....beautiful work and can't wait to read the next one! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 That sounds famili- squirrel! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harmonious_Echos Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 Birds of a feather, post....man, I wish I had some ice cream. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snypiuer Posted October 28, 2012 Report Share Posted October 28, 2012 I have lived my life with my remote control button stuck on scan. This hits FAR too close to home! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbling Mud Heads Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 this fits everyone I know, including me! We all have attention deficient... Oh Look! Peanuts! ...Also don't you think OCD should be CDO, the letters are in the proper alphabetical arrangement in CDO.... but Yes! This is a great poem! I Love it!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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