Kikuyu_Black_Paws Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 He kneels there Holding a smushed And bloody doll I've never seen such a vacant look in anyone's eyes The look of loss The look of 'Non' When there is nothing Non-happiness Non-victory Non-life He leans on his sword, sunk into the ground As if it cannot Possibly hold him Up Cannot hold up the Non in his heart And another stands near A scrap of cloth From a fallen comrade Fluttering at its hilt A non-memorial The blood stains the ground His clothes In a non-shape What is he thinking? Non-thoughts No doubt Because at this point The last moments remaining to him All that's left Is Non. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 That's really well-written; strong image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Preprise Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 This is an intense piece. Very heavy and sad. An original concept as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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