Mira Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 who will eat the world? when it has finally grown ripe and falls from its branch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salinye Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Nice to see you writing, Mira. ~Sal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quincunx Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Wet strikes the world on the ground of itself, splattering, spraying soft Tissue and juice in a fountain, then slithering down to a rounded heap. Teeth are not necessary. All that have mouths now may exercise gluttony, Up from below, or inside chewing out, wounded world of the loam cast out. Flesh is still ripe when deformed by its violent gravity. Let them eat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Preprise Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 Jason says: "Trippy!" This means Jason likes the poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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