Tasslehoff Posted April 25, 2006 Report Share Posted April 25, 2006 (edited) When it rains,I just want to hold you closer.When it rains,I just want to kiss you again.When it rains,I just want you to myself.When it rains,I just want to tell you I miss you.When it rains,I just want you to know Im thinking of you.When it rains. Edited April 25, 2006 by Tasslehoff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted April 25, 2006 Report Share Posted April 25, 2006 Well you already know my first reaction to this since I told you in IRC.. which was: cute I do really like the format, and the simplicity of the whole thing. It's something that wants to hug you and hold you close, and you create that sense with little words. The repeating of the sentence When it rains only adds to this feeling. So, very well written, and thank you for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madhatter Posted April 30, 2006 Report Share Posted April 30, 2006 Great job! I especially loved the structure and the blue font, which definitely made the piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gjunon Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 (edited) ooo your still here tass... nicely done btw http://www.themightypen.net/public/style_emoticons/#EMO_DIR#/smile.gif Edited December 27, 2013 by gjunon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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