Eld Posted May 29, 2005 Report Share Posted May 29, 2005 (edited) From the roar of the horde comes the call to arms, and the ancient doth sigh for shattered sweet calm, and their breasts do swell aye hearts they beat fast, as the ancient sighs again for he knows of this past, glory they shall cry and havoc will reign, the dogs will out aye ‘tis war once again, they’ll ne’er come home for they die in vain, for the glory of those who should hide in shame, now the ancient doth wait as the sun leaves the sky, and tears they trickle from his saddened eyes, oh the war it will come and the young they will die, without ever knowing why the ancient did sigh. Eld Edited June 11, 2005 by Eld Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted May 31, 2005 Report Share Posted May 31, 2005 As a soldier, I can appreciate the theme. It's all too true. Maybe it was me, but the meter seemed a bit rough in places. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted May 31, 2005 Report Share Posted May 31, 2005 ditto on the soldier part... eh, there's always room for shakesperian riffs here and there.. rev... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eld Posted June 11, 2005 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2005 Any suggestions would be most welcome..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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