Arashi Posted February 2, 2005 Report Share Posted February 2, 2005 (edited) Sometimes I wish I would wake up with brain damage So that I couldn't think about you or remember you Sometimes I wish I woke up paralyzed from the neck down To prevent myself from chasing after you Sometimes I wish I were blind Preventing me from ever seeing you smile Sometimes I wish I was deaf So that I could never hear you laugh Sometimes I wish I was dead So that all the pain in my heart of having you ripped away was no more Sometimes I wish I were mute So that I could never whisper the words that destroy galaxies I....Love....You........ __________------ Kind of repetitive, I know, but it has all of my thoughts and emotion in this poetic piece about someone I really care about that has been lost to me forever due to my own stubborn stupidity. I wish I could tell her how much I care about her and how much she meant to me but I have lost the right to love her. Anyway, I hope someone enjoys this. And for the sake of it all, don't be as much of a stubborn dumbass as I was and tell the one you care about that you care or they too may be stripped away from you. Edited February 2, 2005 by Arashi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 2, 2005 Report Share Posted February 2, 2005 First, Welcome back. I think the repetition builds the feeling. I think this poem conveys the feeling of apology pretty well, myself. Maybe give her a link to this? *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetcherrie Posted February 2, 2005 Report Share Posted February 2, 2005 (edited) This is such a bad poem to read while you are listening to "Why?" from Annie Lennox. (the combination left me feeling kind of empty) I have to agree with Peredhill, and think that the repetition only adds on the feelings of despair. I think that that girl is missing out on a very sensitive person. *hugs* -Sweetcherrie Edited February 2, 2005 by Sweetcherrie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arashi Posted February 2, 2005 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2005 well I would give her a link except I have no clue on how I would get it to her. that and if she had any sort of feelings for me I would be surprised because she never had feelings for me in the first place. it was pretty one sided and I am nothing more then a love struck loser. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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