Tattered Posted September 29, 2004 Report Share Posted September 29, 2004 (edited) I’m drivin with one headlight through the darkest night And having your kind of love just left me dry I don’t even know why I gave you my everything I gave you my life You took everything and left my heart to, die Now I’m drivin with one headlight There’s just no sense in trying to fight this My heart still aches why even try to hide it You better believe I am goin to write this My life is poetry and you know it The day you left is the day Love died This is my song and it’s about our love You know that for me love is everlasting Just like the twinking stars above No matter what happens, love’s still twinkling Waiting, slowing dieing….inside crying Images of you and me slow dancing Your perfect body and hands holding me Dreaming of real love you never gave for free Well it only lasted for a short time Then everything came crashing down, down on me There wasn’t an emotion that I didn’t feel I hated you loved and thought I could die I wanted to be your's but nothin was real Intense emotions live deep inside And i'm sure you never even thought twice One day I thought I would surely break free But then I saw you with her, you looked so good You both were smiling you seemed so happy Now tell me, what is wrong with me? I just can't get over you, though I know I should For now I am still drivin with one headlight I am headed towards a dark cold night When you left me, you left me dry I wanted to speak but all I could do is cry You left my broken heart to die Now I am drivin with one headlight Edited September 30, 2004 by Tattered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted September 29, 2004 Report Share Posted September 29, 2004 welcome back home. Good portrayal of heartbreak. I think headlight is one word though! Hugs -Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tattered Posted September 30, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2004 Thanks Pered, if it weren't for you, I don't know that I would jump back into the abis of better writers than myself..just to go unnoticed....except for your thoughtful eye... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted September 30, 2004 Report Share Posted September 30, 2004 I kinda have to laugh - I *still* to this day hesitate to post because I think that so many here are better writers than I. But I post anyway, because when I'm cut, I bleed words. Post because it's in your heart, and you'll find an audience to listen. Even if they don't comment. Perhaps they don't know what to say? Perhaps it resonates so strongly they are dealing with their own memories as they walk away. Truly some read and can't relate, but others read and for more can hardly wait. Your works though few and far between have been worth waiting for, in my opinion. A computer can work spelling and grammar, but it takes a poet to have the courage to offer up their heart to the world through words. Your writing is never perfect, never sterile, and well worth reading. Peredhil's two cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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