Valdar and Astralis Posted September 13, 2004 Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 (edited) Lord, We ask that our plot never vanish from sight, Grammar, punctuation ever be right, Sentence and structure always be tight, While our heroes and villains continue to fight. May words that we chose to be sober Abet in our reader an abject horror And if our chosen subject is light, Incite in the seer sheer mental delight Finally lord if it's your will Help this dear writer over the hill May our flow of words never be blocked And the dam in our minds ever unlocked Amen. Edited September 13, 2004 by Valdar and Astralis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonqueen Posted September 18, 2004 Report Share Posted September 18, 2004 Wow, this is really great! Lovely, concise expressions, nice rhymes and rythyms, great subject...this poem's got it all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted September 18, 2004 Report Share Posted September 18, 2004 beautiful. *hugs Valdar* absolutely beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parmenion Posted September 18, 2004 Report Share Posted September 18, 2004 I ain't a religious lad but if all prayers were written with such finesse and brilliance I might become a convert!! Bravo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tattered Posted September 30, 2004 Report Share Posted September 30, 2004 Hey, this is MY prayer...lol...and heaven knows my writing needs all the help it can get...I suck compared to everyone on here...BUT I love writing none the less, and nothing can stop me...unfortunatly. Thanks for the poem, humorous and insightful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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