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Little Buddha


Appy

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~On request, a happy poem, has a lot of flow problems though, any suggestions and comments are very much appreciated ^_^~

 

The odd-one-out, being white-grey

Master over the other three

When it comes to eating..

call it gobbling, make that eating-spree!

 

Always fighting for his place

And making sure you know

he'll go for fingers and your nose

"I'm king here, now bow low!"

 

But biting isn't in his heart

A nibble 's just as good

it makes you jump, reach for the bowl,

make sure they still have food

 

A big and furry ball he is

when balancing on his hind

trying to wash the down and under

onlookers he's never mind

 

That's when we call him little Buddha

though Winter is his name

he's becomming a bit clumsy

but we love him all the same

 

[05 oktober 2003, Leverkusen]

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wow! so does this mean that i get whatever i ask for?? if so, please make the cheque payable to.....

 

hehe. aaaanyways. personifying the rat was a good idea. you could probably keep going with the idea, the only problem is, you said rats dont run around in that thing. only hampsters do. but still, plenty of material left. i like those things running round and round in that wheel thing.

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