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I just want to cry a little
I just want to crawl away a little
I just want to hide a little
I just want to annoy a little
I just want to jump ahead a little
I just want to push a little
I just want to colour a little
I just want to play about a little
I just want to cuddle a little
I just want to be me
a little
5-3-2015, Wageningen
~ Alternative title: Without masks
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Also *tacklehug!*
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Seeing that smile
her mind was at ease
hers was not the only fake one
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Foolishness to even think
that I could pick this up
Foolishness even to think
that I remembered it all
Foolishness thinking
but wisdom prevails
Next line: Seeing you sparkle
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I don't remember how to write anymore..
Reading a story from a friend of mine, very steampunk, very confusing with formatting and grammar. Loosing words in sentences because of the excitement of writing the story got me thinking.
I don't remember how to write anymore..
It got me reading all my lead-ups to my big story, Interwoven. I'm sure I started it on here too. And while reading all that I had a hard time imagining me writing it.
I don't remember how to write anymore..
And you know why? Because I stopped reading. I've changed friends, I've changed life-style. And I don't read as much as I used to.
Reading helps, I promise myself as of this moment that I will read more. Reading my own things from long-back and reading that short-story of a friend reminded me. I need to READ to be able to WRITE.
I don't rememeber how to write anymore.. but reading will remind me.
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Awesome... makes me want to play Shadowrun that much more
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You watched it at the theatre... didn't you
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Ah then I didn't screw up The whole point was that losing yourself is not always a good thing. But I'm glad you two do think so
No sorry needed! *huggles again* perfectly capable at asking what you meant
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oh dear, if that resonates then either my poem is wrong or something with you two, and I sincerely hope for the first then
also, yay hugs! *huggles back *
Could you explain what resonates? Then I might find what I at least 'don't' want to express and how to change it to what it does mean for me.
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~ part dutch, translation below, but it doesn't scan as well for some reason ~
You lose yourself
I lose myself in you
Het is het hele eenzijdige
alleen bij jou
no chance to be fully me
no chance to be fully you
So
You lose your self
I define my self through you
This is not the way forward
27/11/2014, wageningen
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translated bit:
It's the whole onesidedness
only at yours
~ as I look at it, it's a work in progress.. tell me what you see and I'll try to tell you what I want ~
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~very well put Mardrax.. ok I've been trying several ways now to say I liked it, probably for all the wrong reasons..also it's there'.. not 'their' the first time you used it... unless you meant it that way.. it actually works ...but there you have it, my likes Let's see what I can make of your ricochet ~
Ancient friends in absentia
'twas the flicker and the notion
the carnal pleasure
unfolded
Ancient friendships in absentia
flummoxed and unfolded
the carnal pleasue
t'wixt'
Absent friends
ancient memories
in absentia
~~ might have to come back to this sentence, the implications are bountiful.. now for not a sentence, but a word..~~
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Obsession
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Resistance is futile
Say what you want
the truth wil out
anyways
through your actions
through your looks
through your stance
Resistance is futile
Give a voice
to the truth
before I out it
myself
New line: Wait for the ricochet..
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Lovely, wistful and indeed, nice use of repetition
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Bit corny...
'love is...'
One-liners stating the obvious,
yet not.
'love is...'
Seemingly universal truths,
yet not.
'love is...'
Abundantly sweet,
yet not.
'love is...'
Overused clichees,
yet not.
Love is...
a bit corny,
yet not.
(just had to use more didn't I? Also hi! )
Next line:
The beating of drums inside my body
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Yeah but it's wel worth the effort!
I admit, I went "Teehee" at the end
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Mira! o/
Nice one...
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wauw
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Thank you for keeping us alive! *hugs*
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The mighty pen website is still prominent on my bookmark bar, and I check it regularly. Even if I don't really write at the moment, I still read a lot.
Thanks!
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If needed I can cover it, just need an update on the account and an exchange rate from euro's
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Oh man... now I have to choose! It's medieval at the moment, just because I still enjoy black.. but I also like the default, and the KTan, and the Tower... oh my.
You're all doing a great job!
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Donation on it's way, going to play with the skins now. So far it looks REALLY sleek. I likey!
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*Appy bounces in on her skippyball in search of the Long-Lost-Almost-Dragon and bounces straight into the poem hanging from the ceiling. Startled she throws herself backwards and lands on the floor with a THUD.
Entranced she stares at the new words, not noticing HOW hard she fell.*
mumblebusymumblespeedtududutdutudhmmmm NICE!
*After a quick search of the room (turning over papers and generally making the mess more messy) she sighs at not finding even a scale of the Long-Lost-Almost-Dragon*
I guess not today either, but good idea of hanging that there!
*She digs around in her backpack and scribbles something on a piece of paper with the pen she just took out, hanging it neatly beneath the fresh poem with a pink and purple striped paperclip*
Nice poem! Welcome and see you about no doubt!
PS: See? I can rhyme too!
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Welcome! I'm sure someone who can process your application will be along soon-ish *whisper* we're a kinda slow community nowadays, but that doesn't mean nothing ever happens
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Loved your last
Seriously, well done for doing this. You have my respect!
One day I might dig through them all for some gems, I know they are in here
Good luck on the story writing, I look forward to reading them
First Lines (V. 2.0)
in Banquet Room
Posted
(I couldn't resist)
Too long,
and yet too short.
The end.
(nvm this entry, just continue )