Beautiful Nightmare

Hey wow love the poem! Its really well written! keep up the great work!

Hey brian hun! I like it see told you you could write poems im so proud of you! Try write more to this id say it will kick ass when your done! Um peres my irc dad so he means that just thought id let you know hehe! Keep up the good work babe! Zoom!

awww *hugs* sorry all i can say! love the poem describes it well!

o wow its really cool i love the second one but the first one is not without its charm! Its great appy!

Thanks brian you gotta stop using those one liners hun! Zoom!

Get away from life Pick up the knife Its gleaming touch it Look at you wrist and slit In a heap I lay Death is on its way. Nothing left to be Suicide was for me No note to say why Why should I explain how I used to try? How I used to cry and scream How I thought dying was a pleasant dream. You never noticed you didn’t care, How my mind would bend and tear Horrible thoughts corrupted my mind And the reason to this I could not find. Friends, family do not mourn I am happy, no longer torn.

Happy birthday hun!!!!!!!!!!

All this time im wondering why? All this time you made me cry. I used to be loud, you turned me shy. All this time you beat me All this time i could not see That you were abusing me. Love blinded me from the real you The names you called me made me blue But i didnt know what to do. I love you too much to get away Feeling this is the price for love you pay Maybe it will get better today.

Ah right i understand now *hugs* poor babe!

Hmmmmm someone i know thinks this about me that i am always right And that i am perfect and know everything when to be honest it isnt true at all! I am most of the time as confused as everyone else and no one is perfect not really but you can be perfect in peoples eyes hmmm im rambling i like your poem alot!

*giggles* Well done i love it... :woot:

Wow this is such a great poem i wish i could say yeh arent moms great but hmmm i cant i havent experianced a nice mother but for all those who did i am truley jealous! I like the poem alot its just a petty i cannot relate to it! *hugs*

Awwwww *hugs tightly* i love it its so well written to describe those emotions and put it well simply it just leaves me in awe of you! Seriously *hugs* well done!

*giggles while clapping* very well written its cool well done hehehehe!!! Happy hallowe'en!

*hugs* wow i really love it very sweet! Nice work hun!

Awww pere u have it all wrong i was away on holidays in paris and i missed my friend back in ireland so much! So i wrote this for them! I love your poem though pere thank you!

Why does it have to be this way? Why are you so far away? Here in this hell i dont want to stay. It's next to you i want to lay. Stuck in another dimension from you I'm suffering from withdrawal it's true. I am so sad here and i don't know what to do I'm sitting here hoping you miss me too.

I placed my heart in your hands Listening to all of your demands. With hope… Hope of maybe you liking me, But this will never be. You shredded my hope and my heart, You made me think you liked me from the start. A friendship alone this can be. I don’t think you realise how mean you were to me. You gave me hope when you kissed my cheek softly, Hugging me and giving your attention only to me, Saying sweet things, you gave me hope, I did not see That you never really liked me. I cry so much it hurts my head. I wish you could feel like this instead. Never trust to hope, it will lye. It makes you think things that will never be, it’s sly. I wish I didn’t feel this way, you see I actually thought you truly liked me!

Wow well done i like it alot!

*hides you under a blanky* Really good poem! I dont know what made you write it but well thankfully you wrote it bercause its an excellent poem and very different too!

*hurrys into the room late* o god i missed the party! *puts a small little cuddly toy and a lil card saying happy birthday on the table in hope that someone will come back for it and walks sadly away*

Yey more people to welcome! Welcome welcome:) Wow i liked your poem! Very good!

WELL DONE YEY!!!!!!!!! Welcome hun and a very nicely written piece i might add!

Happy birthday to you happy birthday to you! hehehe happy birthday hun!!!!!!! :wizzie:

O wow i had a lump in my throat reading this letter of goodbye so much emotion in it all i could say when finished it was WOW! well done hun! *hugs* very well wriiten and just wow! So sad.