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T)emon13laT)e

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  1. Sorry for not attending the site as of late. Anyways, here are my three latests poems. Exacerbate These tears still dampen my face The pain will never erase Not much has changed Just a small mental note for my brain I guess I’m hoping for too much Every night I dream of your touch Confusion seems to enjoy its stay I wish it wouldn’t last another day All this shit is driving me insane I try to save myself all in vain I’ve lied to myself once more In the end, I’m the one you abhor The pain I feel must be intoxicating It seems I’m not the only one it is infecting If only I were a stoic champion Maybe then we wouldn’t have met this conclusion I was a fool to believe this would endure For this heart, there is no cure. Eternity’s Gift A whirlpool of misery Grown from the seas I stir. A burning fire Consuming all within reach. The pain I feel I use to slake the fires. Is all but subsiding, A black residue, A dark trail of shame. From out of the ruins A new bird is born. A soul; a spirit made anew. In my eyes a new fire burns- The flames of rebirth, Forever it strives. Tantalizing my every sense, The sensation of life plays with my mind. Is this real? Is this the truth? Or have I been led Like a blind cow to the slaughter Is this my only purpose? To wait for impending doom? Or is there something more, To this meaningless existence? I am lost in the void, A void deep within my mind. When shall I find salvation? When will I find my way out? Eternity’s Curse Through fire and ice, destruction and creation A soul remains, untouched by this world’s corruption. Buried under layers of lies far from reach. The one you see is the truth, Quietly building walls around myself To shelter everyone else but me. I am not afraid of the outside world. I do not hide from this whole new realm. Instead, I hide from my own worst enemy. Dare I learn the truth of me? Dare I embrace it with open arms? The answer I often shy away from For I like the one I see. I care little for human attention. I care little for their grace. This is what I have become, A being that sheds tears for none. I guess the rigors of time have changed my heart. I guess this is all a lie as well. For many still grace my existence, And I thank them by continuing this life. I wish to see my life slip from hands Just to see who really cares. I have seemingly grown up in the dark, And what’s pure seems to slip from my grasp. Now I erupt with unholy fury, Seeking vengeance on my defiler.
  2. It does get annoying having to type my name over and over.... which is why i dont expect you to do it. I'v egotten used to it because i use it as a password for another forum. Oh yeah... email addy :-D Demon13lade@msn.com
  3. Corruption In the dark shadows Where I like to hide, Is a small, dark corner Where I reside. I can no longer bear the truth, And conceive the fate of this world. ‘Tis a thought I’ve given up on; I’ve no hope to be unfurled. As complete as this world can be It remains a desolate abode. I’ll let this world burn in hell; In the dark I shall erode.
  4. Untitled You fill the emptiness which was once in my heart You make me complete- without you I’d be lost Every hour I think of you tirelessly I can’t get my mind off of you Is there something wrong with me? I like to believe it’s just you To me you are the most precious thing in this world I’d do anything to keep you happy And I’ll give you anything you need But sometimes I can’t help but wonder Am I truly what you need? Its actually titled Untitled.... think about it
  5. I'm a little single minded but... Oh well. I'd hav to say my girlfriend.
  6. A Demon We Are Forced to Keep A monster contained within this sanctuary Feeding off the hapless victims caught within ‘Tis a trap cleverly devised to trap the weak Many parish at the hands of this demon And many survive and seek to help others The world is caught within a maelstrom A plague we have brought upon ourselves Unwillingly, we have plotted our demise
  7. A friend It seems we have seen the same things before I have felt like I held something to abhor Never have I seen such an atrocity Until I had found a mirror and found me I’ll be your friend and help you find what you have lost Your true self, the one which comes without the high cost Just listen to me and every word I say Instead of ignoring what could be a great day No one wants to live a life that has gone askew Which is why I am here to help you I’ll try to be a friend and listen to your every cry Just as long you have nothing to deny I do not ask you to forgive and forget And try not to forget the path you’ve trekked Instead embrace your past and use it to grow Become what you want and learn what you know I am your friend and I’ll be here for you And I’ll always be there to help you through comments?
  8. Very simple and yet affective... I like Kitties... but Kuchigusos and cabbits are much much better... LEAVE ME ALONE!
  9. Ahem... Tell anyone of this an I shall surely sever your head from the rest of your body. On a side note: THE RHYMES ARE GOOD! O_o They dont sound forced-like.
  10. *clap* I like it. Reminds me of me... Only my girlfriend is always busy so I dont see her much. =( I find it strange how couples can kiss openly in public. I can't with my girlfriend. Just too many people around. Plus, our school has something against PDA's...
  11. I like the first one. I dton see anything wrong with it. Rhythm is good and NO FORCED RHYMES! (Doesn't like rhymes much) The second poem needs a little work on the rhythm. Its still good though. I like the words you used like: catalyst, cocoon, etc.
  12. Well, one thing is the rhyming. All the rhyming seems forced so I dont really like it. I would say only to use a rhyme when it comes naturally and doesn't stick out. Other than that, Its good.
  13. Oblivion Is it a soul lost in oblivion? Or a soul hidden within your conscious? A thought unwilling to be processed A thought needing the attention Its soul roams the mind free Its haunting presence is a joy like no other It wrangles with the mind just to seek the truth Its insecurities bring the hauntings A pain to breathe in this oblivion Utter chaos- is this deserving? Lost in eternity and unworthy of time Was eternity meant to be a hell? A Flickering Fire Burning fervently in the mind A fire constantly being fed A fire dim at times Always burning nonetheless ‘Tis a fire that requires a kindle This kindle is a rainstorm Why does it ne’er draw near? Is it afraid to hurt the flames? The rain may deceive these flames And yet it brings unexpected growth A flicker- burning bright and dim The flames seem to be lost in dark Oddly, rain lingers around the flames The flames seldom hide from the rain Maybe these flames are an illusion These fires will burn, will the skies bring rain? Two poems I wrote... the emotions I felt are mostly paranoia... unless my fears are true than... i dont know....
  14. thnx for your comments! You are so right!
  15. Archaneus showed me this site! Praise be to Archaneus! ahem... LOVE THE SMILIES! :woot: neways.... I've started a fan fic... but... I'm only on the 3rd chapter! Master As I delve into the answers I’ve sought long and hard More questions arise, causing me to stray from my path. What I now desire is unknown; I am my own master. So I shall choose what I see fit for me, although, It worries me for it may not be what I wish, But all I wish is for the best. I am my own master now; decide I must and soon the day shall come For me to choose my fate. A path of darkness, a path brimming with life. These are what I’ve to choose from. I know what I want but... Why do I hesitate for these restraints? Am I not ready to be the master? Metamorphosis I’ve stared into the mirror of my life long and hard, And finally realized what I have been looking at. I see myself; Happy, nothing wrong. The storm clouds have passed, And the sun shines through As I emerge from my cocoon. I've finally changed, And shall continue to change. It is the inevitable that time brings, But I hope my evolution will be for the better. Time is all I have and yet, It takes away from all I know. And soon all will wither away. For now, I will fight dearly So I can just be with those I hold close. I will try my hardest to enjoy what I have left; Time and more change to undergo, But there is still plenty left for me to take. All I hope is to not act with greed and take too much for then… All will be gone… and my metamorphosis the cause. Nightfall I reach forward and can not see my hand The darkness is all I see I’ll wait here though Till the sun rises and dawn brings new life But it is still night Where I shall ponder in the darkness. Ponder of when day will break Ponder of when the waves shall crash Wait, the day has ended… If the day is gone… Is nightfall all that is left now? Black and White The damned delve deeper into damnation. The sacred seek the damned. All that is holy is all but a vague image. They leave too soon, without a trace. The hopeless still seek hope, But no one is there. The sacred has vanished in search of the damned. It is all so black and white. And yet no one seems to understand. Past It seems this fate I’ve avoided for so long Has decided to be cruel and force me to act. I dare not leave what I love most, But I dare not toss away what I hold so precious. I spend hours upon days, And the days turn to weeks But I’ve not arrived at a conclusion. If I do not act soon, I shall have to let my fate carry me away. And put everything behind me in the past. Better What is this? A world to live in Or might it be hell. How can I know? In a world so corrupt. It surpasses my mind How people can so blindly Throw their lives into the wind. And not really know what they are doing. How can we stop it? We can not help it. For we is I. I stand alone in my endeavors. And I watch over this corrupt land. Waiting for something new. Something bright. Something that will show The peoples of this nation. How to live their lives. How to achieve what they have sought so long; The better man.
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