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The Pen is Mightier than the Sword

WrenWind

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  1. The title of the piece caught my eye first. As I started to read I was pulled into it's flow. Lovely! Found myself taking a deep breath at the end and holding it.
  2. *hugs* i wish i could say take this job and shove it too
  3. I had trouble with that line and I'm still not sure how to fix it. Open to suggestions though. For just one night, to hold you tight. Too much to ask? Too hard a task? For just one night, to still the fright. No guilty thought. No presents bought. For just one night, to taste delight. Just have your heart. Just be one part. For just one night, to love your light.
  4. For just one night, to hold you tight. Too much to ask? Too hard a task? For just one night, to still the fright. No guilty thought. No presents bought. For just one night, to taste delight. Just have your heart. Just feel you start. For just one night, to love your light.
  5. *smiles* This story reminds me of the turtles my bother had when we were kids. Thanks for sharing.
  6. Each word slices deep Heart's now tattered and bleeding Then you leave again
  7. *hugs* I know how hard it is to visit someone we love in pain. That you did means a lot to that person and his family.
  8. Like the changes you made. and like the piece
  9. May flowers blooming Heady scent anounces spring Warm rain on my face
  10. I love this bit ! It made me laugh. Th whole piece if great it rolls through different emotions and flows well.
  11. Tiny drops of blood Hold the contents of my heart Releasing the pain
  12. good work . " There I sat in silent daze, Longing to tell you i missed you so much, But could not risk that depth of words, As you might think I need your crutch." this struck me the most . The depth of emotion in this made me cry
  13. Sadly there are too many of those people on the streets *hugs Regel*
  14. Swooper 98% of the time. If i don't write it all down at once i loose the thread of thought that started it.
  15. *smiles and then hugs* I have felt this way. Well done.
  16. Even though it isn't my fave style of music i did enjoy your show the few times i was able to listen. Lots of fun. Thanks for including us
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