Tasslehoff Posted August 31, 2003 Report Share Posted August 31, 2003 =- Over The Edge -= As I look into your eyes, All I wish to do is die For the image that appears and disappears Doesn't show me in your life Put to the side on a cold night A fury of anger and sorrow It all throws me over the edge Down I fall, Life passing bye As I sink, drowning in my own love for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parmenion Posted August 31, 2003 Report Share Posted August 31, 2003 /me throws Tasslehoff some armbands. j/k mate This poem did paint a very real and vivd picture. I am curious if the spelling of "bye" was intentional. If so maybe a comma before it would help read a bit better. Other than that I think its a grand piece. Will we be seeing something uplifting soon? pretty please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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