Vincent Silver Posted August 27, 2003 Report Share Posted August 27, 2003 (edited) Hide the pain with a smile Dry up all the tears Forgot that I am stupid Even with all my years Forget she doesn't love me I won't remember she didn't care I'll just keep on puting on a show To hide the feelings I cannot bear Try to forget the dumb choice I made Try to ingore her face in my head I just wanna die I just wanna be dead Edited August 27, 2003 by Vincent Silver Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted August 27, 2003 Report Share Posted August 27, 2003 Hiding feelings is no good, I find it's best simply not to have them. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parmenion Posted August 31, 2003 Report Share Posted August 31, 2003 I think the fact that those feeling are here in poem format show us that the feelings are not hidden - my two cents. I enjoyed this poem but would like to add a thought. The one thing none of us has experienced for ourselves is death. We will eventually - that is guaranteed. We may as well experience as much as we can here till such time as we don't actually have the choice. Circumstances and situations are always in a state of flux. Opportunities unexpected present themselves quite frequently. When something fixates us so much that our emotions control our mind to the extent we would make irrational decisions with our very lives, then I think its time to take a step back... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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