Appy Posted August 27, 2003 Report Share Posted August 27, 2003 (edited) Verify my existence for i am helpless without a referrence to the real world outside my head thoughts clouded images shrouded one question remains forever Who am I? [27 augustus 2003, Leverkusen] ----- ~on a lighter note.. the girl stood before me in line for traintickets~ Ode to the girl in front of me Hair flowing like currants of air made visible by smoke I want to touch feel the curls playing on my hands enjoy the softness the silk experience of her hair But i am not allowed by the current society I can only stare and dream We never met before... [26 augustus 2003, Leverkusen] Edited October 20, 2014 by Appy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted August 28, 2003 Report Share Posted August 28, 2003 The first one I really liked. The second one had a nice wistful tone to it (if that makes sense)...overall not really my style though, but that's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted August 29, 2003 Report Share Posted August 29, 2003 Appy - i like both of these. if you figure out how to figure out the answer, please let me know?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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