WrenWind Posted August 15, 2003 Report Share Posted August 15, 2003 There is frost on the window and ice on my heart. You said your peace now take off!! and just Start.. Your new life I do wish you well but don't expect to see me for your wedding bells You have set me free to find me a wife So cold! you won't even shed a tear do I still have a soul? I don't think so, and fear was that your goal? it will be my strife Frozen forever, heartache's pain lost in the nothing I've gone cold and insane A spark , I am warming? The sounds of new life They hand me a child So tiny and new My heart thaws and runs wild A miniature version of you I've lost my x-wife Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted August 15, 2003 Report Share Posted August 15, 2003 *hugs* Its nice to see you writing again Wren i love this poem! and i like the way your ryming went i dont think most people can pull off ryming without sounding like there forcing it but you do a very good job of it hun! *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorciere Posted August 24, 2003 Report Share Posted August 24, 2003 I think the structure of this poem lends perfectly to it's sentiment, your timing and expression are directly in line with the emotions of the theme, I love it, thank you for sharing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parmenion Posted August 24, 2003 Report Share Posted August 24, 2003 Well done *smile* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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