Shadow of the Butterfly Posted July 25, 2003 Report Share Posted July 25, 2003 The soft caress of a life flown by Can be the most singular experience Of a life yet unmade Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Silverblade Posted July 25, 2003 Report Share Posted July 25, 2003 *blinks* Wow... Wonderful. Thoughtful - so very insightful. I liked this a lot. - Justin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salinye Posted July 25, 2003 Report Share Posted July 25, 2003 OHHHHHHH I like that. Makes me wonder how easy it would be to turn it into a haiku. 7, 5, 7 ~Salinye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chanz Posted July 27, 2003 Report Share Posted July 27, 2003 Short but sweet! I liked this alot! Nice Job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alaeha Posted July 27, 2003 Report Share Posted July 27, 2003 (edited) Heh, even at this time of morning, it was short enough that I could read the whole thing. Impressive. *Hugs* It's good. Almost more of a poetic statement than I poem, I think... But unless it's distinctly a short story that just happens to flow and all that in a way that's poem-esque, you can call it a poem. Hmm... I think my message made more sense and was probably more meaningful before I edited it soas to have it actually say something. Oh well. If you want, you can ignore this paragraph and the previous one. *Rehugs* Edited July 27, 2003 by Alaeha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoaringIcarus Posted August 1, 2003 Report Share Posted August 1, 2003 Cool! Life from the perspective of a butterfly larva! Nice to read you. -Icarus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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