Vlad Posted July 10, 2003 Report Share Posted July 10, 2003 (edited) ...after some behavior some of you definetly wouldn't aprove of. --------------- Brittle forces arising fromthe dungeon walls Feeble means of controlling one man's destiny Frail thoughts will forever wander through such halls Madness - conquering many minds so easily Entrance blocked by deep recesses in the soul Exit stolen with such force that even time knows naught Curses flaring and shattering by body whole Old men singing demon's praises Burning flesh surrounds each victim Searching through endless mental mazes Playing a game no one can win Always trapped as a prisoner Ceaseless pain brought upon yourself Things never again will be like they were The changing fates never give dead men help Evil is still very alive Eternally locked inside you More agony it can conive No matter the hell you go through Dwells in my mind Torturing me Every second Of every day Blood rushes in Then it sprays out Into the forsaken world Because it is all in my mind Edit: thanks Chanz Edited July 15, 2003 by Vlad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chanz Posted July 12, 2003 Report Share Posted July 12, 2003 OMG- Very powerful. Very well writen. I really liked this, i've felt this way before, i think thats why i like it so much. Burning flesh surrongs each victim should this be-Burning flesh SURROUNDS each victim? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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