Vlad Posted May 14, 2003 Report Share Posted May 14, 2003 The sweat, the blood, the pain- I don't know what to do, I'm all lost through this world, Working around everything, Leaving it behind for you. The tears, the scars- We get it from each other, Loving every shining moment, Feeling our own thoughts, Trapped inside of heaven. The love- I don't know how to tell, If its the truth or not, It shouldn't really matter, Because you're all I got. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted May 15, 2003 Report Share Posted May 15, 2003 Vlad.. *ponders on what to say* Its a very well written poem. I like it much do to the simple fact that I can relate to the feeling.. Is it true, or is it just cause your all I have? [i hope all is well].. I've read it a few times... over and over again.. trying to think of comments for it, maybe hints or something , but I cant.. Its very good. I know I wouldnt change anything.. Very good Vlad.. Nice to read another of your post.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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