Vlad Posted March 9, 2003 Report Share Posted March 9, 2003 I hide and wait, To see your life, Don't animate- Me from this strife. In the shadows, I seek and squirm, What no one knows, I have to learn. You are beauty- That has been scarred, By what you see, And your own heart. _________________________ Hmm... 4 syllables per line, Consistent rhyme structure, I like this one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whynotsin Posted March 9, 2003 Report Share Posted March 9, 2003 (edited) Very very good.....for a (commiE) just kiding lol. I have jokes, ha har har. Edited March 9, 2003 by whynotsin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted March 9, 2003 Report Share Posted March 9, 2003 I like, Vlad. just curious, what made you write this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whynotsin Posted March 9, 2003 Report Share Posted March 9, 2003 what drives any of us. that should be a forum of it's own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted March 9, 2003 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2003 Whynotsin - you spelled commie wrong Arch - A popular girl that became unpopular simply because she was so popular. Ya, you think about that one... Whynotsin - Forum? No... Thread in C- room? I think there is one... (kinda old though) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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