Vlad Posted February 27, 2003 Report Share Posted February 27, 2003 This has been going on for a long time now The last breath, Then what? It's all the same to me. You dare not say. The pain is real, the horrid pain Your pain reaches mine, And I fall among friends, fall unknown. I hear the damned voices A simple tearing at my heart These tears flow from my eyes, What am I to feel? Made from the works of: Vlad, Peredhil, Rival, Tasslehoff, DoomGaze, Rune, Alaeha, James Devin, Falcon, Deadly Nightshade... I think that's everbody. Enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 27, 2003 Report Share Posted February 27, 2003 The last one of these I saw looked like a conglamoration that didn't really work together but this one does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nyyark Posted February 28, 2003 Report Share Posted February 28, 2003 Reminds me of reading the Contents in a collection of Walt Whitman poems. Wouldn't have known what you did if you hadn't said so, so I guess you succeeded. Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alaeha Posted February 28, 2003 Report Share Posted February 28, 2003 *laughs* I'm flattered to have been included. Amazing how you made it all flow together. It seemed like it was all one poem, save for the slight differences in style. I think we've found the Dr. Frankenstein of Poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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