Tasslehoff Posted February 23, 2003 Report Share Posted February 23, 2003 the game we play, provides us with the strength, to test our own sanity, can you keep up with me now, Im finally ahead of your plan, completely done with you, no more tricks; no more lies, seeing the truth among a few, sadness escapes me; no more watery eyes, there is a new me in this new world, with new hope and regenerated wings I fly, exploring all that is new I know its not great, and it doesnt flow well, but its a start, needed to write it donw atleast, before I lost the paper. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted February 23, 2003 Report Share Posted February 23, 2003 Well, I like is Tas. Do you mind if I call you that? So used to Tasslehoff being called Tas from the books. Anyhow. I like that poem. It flows nicely how it is, in my opinion at least. Kokuryuu grins a silver-white fanged grin and claps Nice work! -Ryuu :dragon4: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted February 23, 2003 Report Share Posted February 23, 2003 I like it. It does get choppy at times, but overall it's fine. I enjoyed the theme of this poem, creating a sense of dignity. Can't think of improvements.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted February 23, 2003 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2003 Sure Kokuryuu , you can call me Tass, I dont mind, I mean, I mostly refer to myself as the kender anywho. lol Tasslehoff is a long word! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted February 24, 2003 Report Share Posted February 24, 2003 tas it is then, dear kender. now i've got to get people tp call me RYUU! Kokuryuu is fine too but it's more complicated if not longer than Tasslehoff! -Ryuu :dragon4: () Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted February 24, 2003 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2003 Very well Then Ryuu, we got a deal! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted February 24, 2003 Report Share Posted February 24, 2003 Kokuryuu puts a paw out to the tiny kender and grins Deal. :-P -Ryuu :dragon4: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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