Falcon2001 Posted February 19, 2003 Report Share Posted February 19, 2003 The Imperfect Angel, my secret name A title of pride but also of pain The Duke of Demons, the Earl of Error The Angel with wings of a darker feather I'll draw you closer into my life For good or bad, for death of life I need to feel you, know that you care I need to smell you, touch your hair Stain my wings a deeper black To show my pride instead of my lack Stain my wings and let me fly Deep into the dark night sky Stain my wings with thoughts of you Let me be break all the rules Stain my wings with love and night Hold me close and off we'll fly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted February 19, 2003 Report Share Posted February 19, 2003 Bravo Job Falcon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted February 19, 2003 Report Share Posted February 19, 2003 *Gyrfalcon applauds Falcon's work!* I'm saving this simply because of how much I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HopperWolf Posted February 19, 2003 Report Share Posted February 19, 2003 okay, I LOVE the use of contrast especially the line, "The Angel with wings of a darker feather" the conflict illustrated between intention and effect is one I am sure we have all dealt with. good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaneus Posted February 19, 2003 Report Share Posted February 19, 2003 Eww. I really like. It gives the impression of a creature who knows it it blemished but doesn't care and maybe even revels in it. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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