Vlad Posted February 7, 2003 Report Share Posted February 7, 2003 Live forever, see the world, Sounds like a good deal, Lose your body, sell your soul, Hey, that's all cool with me. Skeletons, there all too skinny, No meat, just bones, And it gets kinda cold, Plus, too easy to spot. Zombies, now their differents, Always groggy, not just in the mornings, Moan a lot, just complain all day, Naw, too slow. Hmm, mummies, I like them, Never had a daddy, but its all fine, A bit stuffy, all those wraps, But you could get used to it, I suppose. But vampires, that's the life for me. Free to go wherever, simple really, Just drink some precious life. And stay out of the sun. Oh yeah!!! My first poem in a while, that I actually like!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vigil StarGazer Posted February 8, 2003 Report Share Posted February 8, 2003 Good poem, while it meationes the undead there's not a sense of dread usually accompanied with it... but rather a free style easy flowing feel which gives gothic writing a uniqueness unmatched. The construction and the prose are monologue fair, sounds like a musing from the author... with a touch of humor that almost spurs randomly in the usual mind. Overall excellent work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted February 11, 2003 Report Share Posted February 11, 2003 Reminds me of a childs glimpse of what is normally a dark subject. Kind of lighthearted and funny in a way. Thank you for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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