Guest wordphoole Posted December 7, 2002 Report Share Posted December 7, 2002 That's cool. It's withdrawn. Edited by: wordphoole at: 12/10/02 4:22:02 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Kasmandre Posted December 7, 2002 Report Share Posted December 7, 2002 Wow. Very cool. Very...imageretic (I make up words when it's past one in the morning). I like it. -------------- Kasmandre, Initiate of the Pen "Time slowed, reality bent. On and on the Eggman went." -Dreamcatcher. by Stephen King "So long, and thanks for all the fish." -Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. by Douglas Adams "Let's Roll." -Flight 93 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Portrait of Zool Posted December 7, 2002 Report Share Posted December 7, 2002 That's what I'm talkin' about. From a fool's fool, welcome, phoole ~Zool~ He who goes around, comes around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted December 8, 2002 Report Share Posted December 8, 2002 **shudder** brrr, someone's got 'Frost' on the brain... revery the dreamlost "oh sweet bird of repose" (sky heros) the dream continues... Edited by: reverie at: 12/8/02 7:06:31 am Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rhapsody Posted December 8, 2002 Report Share Posted December 8, 2002 Very nice...I sense a Poet in the making. G'luck to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest wordphoole Posted December 9, 2002 Report Share Posted December 9, 2002 Thank you folks, for your kind words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvern Posted December 10, 2002 Report Share Posted December 10, 2002 Wordphoole, First of all, my apologies for the time it took for me to get to this application... I've been busy with RL work recently, and unfortunatly haven't had quite as much time as I'd have liked for the Pen. Secondly, allow me to add my praise to what others have said about your poem... I really enjoyed "Autumn Winds of Home", particularly your uses of imagery in the poem and your personifications of emotions in the elements of nature ("the sorrow of the wind" being a great example of this). I also liked the poem's melancholy switch in tone in stanza 4, as well as the structure of the work. As excellent a work as this is, however, an application to the Pen must consist of a piece of writing specificaly written with the intention of joining the Pen, not a previously archived work. I highly encourage you to write another poem newly written for the Pen as your application, as judging by the quality of your writing I'm certain it'll be accepted. I eagerly look forward to accepting you then... ------------------------------ Almost a Dragon... "If it doesn't make dollars then it doesn't make sense" - Triple Seis, "Glamour Life" Owner of the Decanter of Endless Booze. Edited by: Wyvern00 at: 12/9/02 9:14:28 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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