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When You Love Someone Too


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Guest Balladore

I glance across the floor

To see her standing there

I wish she could see me too

Standing here staring at her.

 

When you love someone too,

The way I love you…

You’ll understand…

You have to hold their hand

See their beautiful face…

Feel their warm embrace

Be with them every minute of the day…

And never be away.

 

Pounding in my veins

I think that I have found

The one I’ll always love

The music sounds so loud

 

When you love someone too,

The way I love you…

You’ll understand…

You have to hold their hand

See their beautiful face…

Feel their warm embrace

Be with them every minute of the day…

And never be away.

 

Though we’re at a concert

The music goes over my head

All I do is hurt

And I find myself having said…

 

When you love someone too,

The way I love you…

You’ll understand…

You have to hold their hand

See their beautiful face…

Feel their warm embrace

Be with them every minute of the day…

And never be away.

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Guest Heart Like A Hole

I echo the sentiments of Gyr and must say that this is a particularly beautiful piece of prose.

 

 

 

~Porcelain

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Guest Lord Seth Exodus

A smokey bar, a 1920's jazz band in white dinner jackets, a fore-lorned looking young man gazing at the lady in red across the room from over his glass. I see it all. I love it. The whole idea, so well portrayed, is classic. Very well done, my friend.

 

 

 

-Seth Exodus

 

Initiate of The Pen

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