Guest Jess Posted February 9, 2002 Report Share Posted February 9, 2002 He sits there, Never turning towards me. Never noticing me, Never paying attention. I feel I've tired everything, To gain his affections. He is annoyed by my talking, And seldomly does he care, If I ignore him. He stands there, Looking right through me. Turns his head, and nods, While I speak, But he's not comprehending, What I'm trying to convey. His eye are boring a hole into me, And it's going straight for my heart. I wish I could tell him, But I'm much too afraid. He won't understand, What's going on in my head. He'll just say, No, you're not right for me. You're not attractive enough, And too immature. You're not what I want, Nor will you ever be. Now, if you'll please go away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcon2001 Posted February 9, 2002 Report Share Posted February 9, 2002 Well whoever it is is an @#%$, Jess, if he thinks that...but that's my opinion Great poem, like I told ya before. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Jess Posted February 9, 2002 Report Share Posted February 9, 2002 LOL... Maybe some day I'll tell you who and why he would say that. But not now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted February 10, 2002 Report Share Posted February 10, 2002 *Gyr echoes the other Falcon's comments* Also, I like your poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Jess Posted February 10, 2002 Report Share Posted February 10, 2002 He's not an @$#! I wish I could explain, but he is so far from an @#$! At least he gives me good poetry, and when he smiles (which is, sadly, very seldomly) I melt. Falcon, if you ever tell Willie I'll set aside my desire to change my projected images and do everything to you that I can think of! Thank you Gryfalcon! It means a lot to have my work honored! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 10, 2002 Report Share Posted February 10, 2002 Gary Larson had a cartoon once, in which their were two panels. In the uppers panel, a young man lies on his bed, the full moon shining through the window. His thought balloon shows him agonizing, Something to the effect of: "She likes me. She doesn't know I exist. No, she looked at me in the Hallway! But I'd sneezed. Maybe she likes me! She just smiles at everyone." Etc. The bottom panel shows a young lass in her bed. The same full moon shines through her window. Her thought balloon shows the text: "I think I like vanilla best." The cartoon caption reads: "Same Planet, Different Worlds." I used to think, all those years ago, in High School, that I lived that cartoon. The agonies through which I'd put myself! Have you tried talking to the fellow? It collapses so many probabilities into a reality, which then can be enjoyed or survived as the case may be... Hugs For what it's worth, Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Jess Posted February 10, 2002 Report Share Posted February 10, 2002 Thank you for the advice, and under normal cercumstances I'd take it. But I'm afraid he's 9 years older than me, so it makes it very hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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