Rahsash Geldich Posted February 3, 2002 Report Share Posted February 3, 2002 I take in a deep breath of air, It echoes loudly in my ears Little bubbles dance from me They come but no one hears The little light that reaches Down here casts shadows That mottle the floor and Dance fae-like in meadows. It is quiet. My mind calms. My brain performs basic Functions and lazes like The fish, a colorful mosaic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted February 4, 2002 Report Share Posted February 4, 2002 *Gyr applauds* I like it, though I never have found watching fish too restful... a sleeping cat, now... *smiles* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bhurin Posted February 4, 2002 Report Share Posted February 4, 2002 A nifty little diddy, pleasing to the the ear. The atmosphere is almost dream-like, but I get that sensation one has when they're really tired but not asleep when I read it. You've certainly posted a lot of work since you joined. Keep it up. Signed- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcon2001 Posted February 5, 2002 Report Share Posted February 5, 2002 Mmmmmm...fishy...yum... Great stuff! Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 5, 2002 Report Share Posted February 5, 2002 Nicely done. One can almost see the little fishy. Where is the little fishy? Peredhil slaps himself before he segues into the Intermission from Monty Python's Meaning of Life Movie. I'm reminded of the calming effect fish had on the protagonists of C.J. Cherryh's Cyteen novels. -Peredhil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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