Rahsash Geldich Posted January 20, 2002 Report Share Posted January 20, 2002 I had a dream the other night, You saw me and your eyes took light, Cradled me in your arms, held me tight Whispered everything would be alright. And I nestled myself in your arms, Told myself I was far out of harms Way. Happiness settled in gentle swarms. I was totally enveloped by your charm. ((To be finished at a later date, it feels like the middle of something, but I need the rest, so its to be continued)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahsash Geldich Posted January 21, 2002 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2002 But then I woke up to the world again And watched my life go down the drain. I was still singing that morbid refrain. Been hit again by a metaphorical train. I remember when you still loved me, When I was the only one you could see. I guess it simply wasn't meant to be. When I should stand, I only flee. Its all my fault that I sit alone I simply wish I had known My true feelings coulda been shown If only different winds had blown. ((still to be continued, expect a lenthy one....)) Edited by: Rahsash Geldich at: 1/20/02 8:11:47 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted February 5, 2002 Report Share Posted February 5, 2002 Peredhil whispers, I hope your continuation finds self and love. Enduring love is two strong individuals coming together and building a relationship, not a transitory loss of self in feeling that inevitably recedes like the tides... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahsash Geldich Posted February 7, 2002 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2002 ((I believe this is the end, thank you very much for your wishes Peredhil, I needed to hear those words and I thank you again for saying them. Also thanks for your replies to my poetry, I enjoy reading them because I believe they make me a better writer.)) I forced myself to move once more Not knowing what is now in store. I kept my eyes glued to the floor, And heard someone open up the door. I slowly, forcedly, raised my eyes, Removing the focous of my demise. I then recieved the most welcome surprise! From my mouth lept joyus cries! You were still there, right in front of me My dream played out so I could see. We promised each other we'd be free To follow our hearts and let irony be. ((I'm not sure if I really like the ending, I may change it later....)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Jess Posted February 9, 2002 Report Share Posted February 9, 2002 I really like that poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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