Gwaihir Posted October 16, 2002 Report Share Posted October 16, 2002 This poem almost felt too personal to post, but I don't know why I shouldn't so I did To Elizabeth You’re tough. No one can ever make you cry, ‘Til you’re alone. Your pain is your secret. You’ve always been like that-no matter what: Fractured your leg being a daredevil, And then you walked on it, all the way home. You balanced on a slanted third floor roof, Purely to hang a silly pineapple. You act very unreachable these days. As you grow up and everything changes, Lizzy, some things just need to stay the same. One of those things I rather wish you’d keep Is you and me-Sisters. Edited by: gwaihir1 at: 10/16/02 9:11:50 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted October 16, 2002 Report Share Posted October 16, 2002 Walked home on a fractured leg? *winces* Ouch. *applauds* Good poem, Gwaihir- show it to your sister. (If you haven't already done so) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gwaihir Posted October 16, 2002 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2002 I will. My mom and I are both giving her a poem, so I'm waiting for my mom to write hers . Edited by: gwaihir1 at: 10/16/02 9:12:05 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted November 1, 2002 Report Share Posted November 1, 2002 Does your sister ever read stuff at the pen? Quite well written, if I do say so myself, old chap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoaringIcarus Posted November 1, 2002 Report Share Posted November 1, 2002 Dear Gwaihir, I do very much enjoy this poem, and the work of yours on The Pen that I have read thus far. Nyyark13 suggests that we have a great deal in common, and that topic is something I would be very interested in conversing with you on a more private occasion. My e-mail is AncientAutumn@opendiary.com, and I hope to learn yours sometime, but I must get back to my own devices, before returning to the room in which I left Nyyark13. I look forward to speaking with you. -Icarus Edited by: Nyyark at: 11/1/02 1:10:30 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gwaihir Posted November 2, 2002 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2002 Vlad- No she doesn't that's why it's safe here SoaringIcarus- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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