The Big Pointy One Posted September 15, 2002 Report Share Posted September 15, 2002 Yeah, these are just a few things that I've scribbled down when I've felt so inspired (I've finally got around to carrying a notepad with me.) ...some may seem kinda stalker-ish or something, but whatever. It's basically what's on my mind, and I feel like sharing. Yay! (they all appear as they do on my notepad...) And I also realise not everyone would consider this poetry, it's almost completely formless... and yes, it is rather depressing stuff. Oh well. Perhaps I'll add a bunny poem sooner or later. ~They're all title-less~ I can't sleep because I can't get you out of my head... But I bet you don't spare me a second thought Okay, so I know you don't really owe me anything, what have I ever done for you? Did I ever tell you how I treasure that one sweet moment when your lips graced mine? Well, I do. Don't get me started on the tears I can't shed. I am born to walk alone my heart is long gone I've emptied all my tears (been) consumed (by) all my fears Yet it all still haunts me Like a sadistic ghost of melancholic desire that feeds on all my pain which never seems to end but it all disappears when i'm near you at least for an instant before reality kicks (in) and leaves me huddle up in my bed trying to cry, gibbering quaking, pouting shaking. I can't stop calling your name. It's one a.m. and I'm lying here thinking. She's always on my mind, but tonight she doesn't consume my thoughts. Tonight I can't stop thinking of my future; or the lack there of. I can't find the light; maybe I'm looking with the wrong tunnel vision. I know I'll always be alone, I just don't know If it'll be my choice. And yes, it hurts. Everything hurts. I saw you today. God you're beautiful. I saw you today. I tried not to stare. I saw you today. I love the way you move. I saw you today. But I didn't say anything. I saw you today. I don't think you noticed. I saw you today. I know you tried not to see me. Can you conceive the pain I go through? Are you feeling it? I don't know, it doesn't matter. I saw you today. (and just in case I want to quote myself, here's a few random lines I also wrote down:) "Look at my eyes. Can you see how they're screaming from the pain I'm trying to hide?" "What you see on the surface is but the tiniest reflection of how I truly feel." (yes, it works both ways... ) "As the darkness under my eyes grows larger, so does the one in my heart." "Heaven is in your eyes." ~~~ BigPointyStick ----------------- Wielder of the BPS Companion of Mr.Bunny "My name shall be synonymous with fuzzy bunnies." from Koznik's Inferno (a flash animation). Find out what secondary animated character you are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted September 15, 2002 Report Share Posted September 15, 2002 Whoo. *applauds* Excellent poetry, Stick, especially since it was (somewhat) randomly written. It makes me want to do the same (take a notebook with me), except I don't write and walk very efficently. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Big Pointy One Posted September 15, 2002 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2002 *grins* What, you can't stop walking for a couple seconds? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted September 15, 2002 Report Share Posted September 15, 2002 resisting flashbacks to his High School Daze carrying a notebook to jot things is a proven good idea - which you just proved again. Good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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