James Crow Posted November 3, 2013 Report Share Posted November 3, 2013 Out in the woods, feeling so alone.Never had a girl, to call my own.Lost out in the trees,no one will come searching for me.But it is better this way,to just end it all today.Yet as I close my eyes,I'm awoken by a surprise.You where next to me,saying you will always be. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Portrait of Zool Posted November 3, 2013 Report Share Posted November 3, 2013 I always love happy endings. Well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brighid of Byrness Posted November 3, 2013 Report Share Posted November 3, 2013 I'll echo Zool's sentiments...I love happy endings! (Sometimes we just forget that we're all connected and never alone ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harmonious_Echos Posted November 11, 2013 Report Share Posted November 11, 2013 *grammar Nazi...'were' not 'where' in the 2nd to last line? Haha, sorry, can't help it. Two of the Nine Voices are serious perfectionists. I'd like to see more though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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