Preprise Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 (edited) Edited October 16, 2009 by Jason Newcomb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Preprise Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 I am glad you liked the lyrics! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galindo1 Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 (edited) You've got a nice voice in your poems . . . a nice sound to read. The repetition of first words in the lines might be a bit much, but still! lovely. ah, i'm new here. hi. Edited December 15, 2009 by Bouts_of_coughing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Preprise Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 You've got a nice voice in your poems . . . a nice sound to read. The repetition of first words in the lines might be a bit much, but still! lovely. ah, i'm new here. hi. Hmm, that's a good point. When i sing this song the first part did feel a little off. Your feedback is very helpful. I'll tweak this a bit. Thank you for the input and welcome to the community! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snypiuer Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 First, any relation to Duke? ......................... ............................ Duke Nukem'...... ............................... .................................. ............................................. COME ON! THAT'S FUNNY! Anyways, like your stuff (as I've posted elsewhere, I'm not a good critic - so, 'Snypiuer like' is about it). Also, don't know if you ever do covers, but I think you could do an interesting take on Colin Hays' 'You Looking at Me?' OR (Oh, this just came to me!), how about putting some of the other Pennites' works to music? It could be part of the whole 'Getting people to post more' thing. They'd post a work for consideration and it could be voted on, winner gets Newcomb... -ed? -ised? -ated? Just a thought! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Newcombated, I think. And I like where you're going with your idea! At some point I certainly intend to work on something a bit more lyrical (and long). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Preprise Posted December 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 First, any relation to Duke? ......................... ............................ Duke Nukem'...... ............................... .................................. ............................................. COME ON! THAT'S FUNNY! HA! Also, don't know if you ever do covers,Dig a little in my youtube chanel. You'll find some covers. OR (Oh, this just came to me!), how about putting some of the other Pennites' works to music? Absolutely! I've got some chords and melodies just waiting for lyrics! I would like to discuss this project with the admins and organize it practically. So that it becomes a reality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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